Unusual, Creative and Courageous first fontstruction. Finding a good balance between functionality and distorsion at this level is not an easy task believe me, i've been there with some of my insane projects. You made a good job here, even if i think it would gain to be maybe a weebit (not so much, really) less confused. Do cntinue to explore the medium and with maturity some more clarity will appear even in the craziest esthetics. Welcome to FS. Hope you'll have great time here.
By the way, do you know you can increase the space between words ? This work would really need it. For this, go to the character "space" between "z" and "0", then in the menu select "View" then "Letter width", a green bar will appear, you can push it from case to case with your mouse: to the right, to increase spacing, to the left, to decrease it.